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She was promised a true love story,
A boy who would sweep her off her feet,
Instead she was given a broken heart,
She was kicked to the ground.

She dreams of the perfect guy,
And how they met.
He started off perfect,
but now he's just a mess.

She thought she could help him,
Take him from the darkness,
He got angry and left her once again.
She cries.

Somewhere,somehow,he had revelations,
He broke down crying,after realising what he had done.
He'd left the only girl who ever loved him through thick and thin.
He ran and ran back to the apartement where they lived.

It was quiet,the tap dripping slowly.
He calls out her name,he gets no reply.
He sits on the chair and takes out a drink.
He takes large gulps to ease the pain.

He hears footsteps,
He stands up and runs towards the door,
He opens it,and there she stands,
Tears in her eyes from sadness and happiness,

She thought she'd lost him,
Lost him forever,
But he can't hide from love,
He couldn't live without her.
It's kind of hard to describe this poem to be honest, I don't exactly know where I was going with it when I was writing, I just wrote whatever.But I hope you's find some sense in it? haha
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YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
That guy is lucky. Most of the time, it's too late.
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RedRainX Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
That is true, most of the time it is :( which is sad :(
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YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep...
My love and I had a discussion. She warned me of the difference between love and obsession. She explained that if I was obsessed with her, she would get bored after a few years and leave, then realize she had made the wrong decision, and try to come back, only for it to be too late.

It was really rather enlightening.
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RedRainX Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Awh :( I'm sorry to hear that! But it was obviously not meant to be and fate is getting you ready for the best one :) thats the way I look at life heh.. :)
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YourBuddyBill Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No, that's the thing: She warned me BEFORE I crossed that line. A real lifesaver.
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Mrs-Freestar-Bul Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was sad first, but it had a happy ending. Beautiful. İ like it:dalove:
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RedRainX Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Yeah, I thought it was a bit too sad so I added something nice hehe :)
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